HEADACHER's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I WUZ A TEENAGE SERIAL KILLER?!]

This was great! Well animated and from the point that the MC's mom came into the room, was quite funny too. The only thing that sticks out to me is the dialogue up until that point. It's just painstakingly standard to a incredibly generic degree. Some more panicky and incoherent dialogue from the Daniel instead of exposition and obvious shit would've been so much better.

"Is that a knife?!?" no shit dumbass who even talks like that??

Overall really well made though, just gotta work on that dialogue more. MC is a bit of a melvin as well but sure that fits the vibe overall, can';t complain there.

Keep it up!!

horrorhare responds:

hey thanks! i appreciate the criticism :]] the dialogue is probs my least favorite about it but i only had like a week to write the script last semester... hopefully next go around itll be better lol

[Madness: Expedition]

v cute and well animated but also FUCK YOUU !!!! (keep up the great work :D)

vhsdreamland responds:

thank you!!!