I like the animation a lot, and the backgrounds are pretty damn solid, but the long hair dude's voice is nothing but mumbling. Is that a purposeful decision or just a poor audio setup?
It's quite hard to know what he's saying for most of the runtime. It's unfortunate since the writing is funny enough and the plot seems well realized.
Keep it up!
This was great! Well animated and from the point that the MC's mom came into the room, was quite funny too. The only thing that sticks out to me is the dialogue up until that point. It's just painstakingly standard to a incredibly generic degree. Some more panicky and incoherent dialogue from the Daniel instead of exposition and obvious shit would've been so much better.
"Is that a knife?!?" no shit dumbass who even talks like that??
Overall really well made though, just gotta work on that dialogue more. MC is a bit of a melvin as well but sure that fits the vibe overall, can';t complain there.
Keep it up!!
hey thanks! i appreciate the criticism :]] the dialogue is probs my least favorite about it but i only had like a week to write the script last semester... hopefully next go around itll be better lol
v cute and well animated but also FUCK YOUU !!!! (keep up the great work :D)
thank you!!!
this shit is pure schizo I love it, the blend of old messy NG animation with off the wall loud==funny humor is superb and works way better than I thought it would
Dude this is some of the most beautiful block shading and cross hatching in the environment I've ever seen, gorgeous work!
Everything looks so natural and slick!!
I really can't tell if the dialogue is ironically bad or if it was just added to pad out the setup
I get a lot of headaches ouch owie
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